Feedback from Twila on outline draft 1

My notes taken during a feedback meeting with Twila. Sorry if some of this shorthand is only clear to me :)

• Purpose: 1-3 goals that seem worth emphasizing
• Purpose related to outcome:
• “Broadband access is still a limiting factor in many parts of the world”
  • We can only do so much within the system
• “Hourglass” metaphor for writing: Forest -> trees -> forest
• Community-wide problem of providing technical training
  • Technical solutions and mitigations exist
  • Resources for replicating our work (e.g. Jupyter Blog post)
  • Still existing problem: Cost! Requires expertise (2i2c); how to reduce the barriers?
• Remember the audience is cryosphere folks. For most people listening, they should check out CryoCloud! i.e. “Next steps: Sign up for CryoCloud!”
• Accessibility and inclusion goals apply both specifically to our workshop and in a community sense.
• Logos: QGreenland, CryoCloud, NSF, NSIDC, NASA
• Title slide: authors, co-authors, affiliations
  • Note: This is the slide after the title slide.
• Look at past AGU slides from QGreenland OneDrive
• Title statements can be very short and help build a narrative at a high level
• “What is QGreenland?” slide: Can find from other talks.
  • “What is QGIS?”
• QR code and/or link to Jupyter Blog post
  • Matt: I link to the AGU talk’s “References” page which links out to everything else.
  • anywhere I don’t want to go in to more details
    • Matt: I mention in speaker notes there’s a QR code on last slide
• Link to QGreenland workshop